Maggie Roe Feedback

So my group members looked over my rough draft and had a few critiques for me. First off, I need to get my point across more clear. I just laid out a number of different facts about college drinking and the legal drinking age, but I did not establish a definite point. Also, my pictures did not show up on the website which I should fix. I should have more flow with my writing and I should vary my layouts on each page. Even though I made a navigation bar on the home page, I forgot to have any links on the other pages. I should probably get on that.

-Maggie Roe