Thursday, October 20, 2011

Group Feedback

My group really helped me to focus the different ideas I had for directions in which I could take my topic of gay marriage. What I had written up until this point was unfocused and generic, and Ryan helped me to consolidate down to simply contrasting the different viewpoints on the issue. Mallory also provided some constructive criticism on making the writing style more direct and to the point. Overall, it was a very productive meeting.
-Chris Hughes

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