After looking over my website with my group, they suggested to me some formatting changes (some of the titles were confusing or unclear, as were some of the layouts). Also, they suggested that I add in some more photos or videos to keep things from looking dull. They were also helpful in pointing out some links that were dead so I could fix those. Matt recommended that I look into adding a section on Obama's healthcare plan, which I think I will do. Also, they thought I could add in some more examples to illustrate my points.
In comparison to the Challenging the Chip readings, my examples, and those of the rest of my group, were very different. Challenging the Chip took the approach of using many, many statistics, which we found boring and not at all engaging. All of us used stories for examples, which we all agreed was far more effective. We also thought that the examples given in the reading could have applied to just about any industrial industry--lack of pay, harassment or excessive overtime are not unique to the electronics manufacturing industry nor women. We wished there was more evidence that was specific to only that industry, instead of something that seemed like you could adapt to fit any industry by changing a few words.
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