My comic concerns Marcus' seemingly decreased caution about being watched as the story progresses. While reading, I noticed that initially after being released, he was very cautious about using technology and talking to people because he felt watched and was suspicious about cameras and such. However, I noticed that by the end of chapter 10, Marcus seems to have forgotten any threat and totally resumed using all his technology - Xnet and his "arphid cloner," - and has even thrown a huge attention-drawing party and preached about how he is going to take down the DHS. I believe Marcus should be punished for this lack of discretion, so in my strip, he is being monitored by a not-so-stealthy DHS agent and eventually ends up behind bars and on his way to Guantanamo Bay.. It is a tragic tale indeed.
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Anthony DeCosta
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