Group Feedback

My group feedback session was very helpful. After discussing Challenging the Chip, we passed around our computers and compared each other's drafts of our websites. After exchanging ideas with Briar and Gianmarco (I hope that is correct spelling), they gave me feedback on my own site. Although I do fully agree with Gianmarco that my site was a little bland yet again, I was too invested in my design to revert back and change it. However, everyone's ideas about how to get a more specific concept with my content helped exponentially. I was able to go back into Kompozer, rewrite some pages, and even add some pages onto my already existing draft. Overall, the meeting was a great success for my own personal hypertext.