Feedback/Challenging the Chip

My groups feedback told me to take more perspectives, they said I was concentrating to hard on the side of the argument I was arguing, and not giving any other perspective. So I wrote for the parents with expectations, and they were right it helped a lot. When it comes to challenging the chip, it was extremely informative and definitely helped me get a feel for the strain the workers were made to live with. When it comes to design I need more links and I’m getting on that. All in all my website needed more opinions and easier navigation, both have been revised and made a much better draft.